Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Quickwrite- Painting

This is what I wrote about the painting of the girl that Mr. Sutherland showed us in his class earlier... 

Her name is Annabelle and her fiancé has just died. he was in the hospital with a serious case of the flu, and when she'd come to visit him, she'd found an empty bed and a quickly scrawled goodbye note. The basket of fruit on the bed is a basket she'd been bring to share with him. The curtain is pulled back to let the nurses know that the hospital room is not unoccupied. The window is open to let in fresh air because the smell of death is really unpleasant. She'd reread the letter at least ten times before it sank in that her fiancé, Patrick, had passed away. The chair in the corner is where she would always sit on other days of visit. The red blanket on the bed belonged to her and Patrick, but now that the man of the couple had died the hospital would probably try to say that the blanket was theirs all along. Then, one nurse out of the group would sympathize with Annabella, but that nurse, named Molly, would end up murdered by the lead doctor's hands. No one goes against his word because, incidentally, he's a sociopath with a major god-complex.

No comments:

Post a Comment